Awesome funky vibe, but repetitive.
Loved it instantly when it came onto the NGAP Radio and after playing it a 2nd time, wanted to review it. But your own comment kinda sums up my big criticism - the repetition.
I love the basic loop going on, but it's kinda overpowering and whilst I can hear some funky stuff in the bg, it's not enough.
Around 2:19, some funky guitars are overlaid. If you had a layer like that running through the entire piece, it could totally rock.
Thing is that I love what you've got here - just feels unfinished to me - lacking one final layer. It reminds me of some of the Donkey Kong Country tunes for some reason and if some flowing guitars were laid over it all and it were made into a 1-1:30ish loop, it'd be totally awesome for some game.
Maybe a Game in which you're in an abandoned area full of delights - like Shadow Factory but with a funkier vibe.
Have you/will you ever continue this?
Thnx! Liked this review better than your others; If possible, keep giving advice like you did here. I would love to continue making a lot of music, but my computer is messed up, and my DVD drive and Windows don't work right, meaning I have to use an older version of my Music Making software. Plz check my newest song (The Murderer's Planet). I'll make these better when I get my computer working.