Yeah it's choppy but it's has a good vibe. Very nice beginning, to bad you're using a pedal, because the change till the distortion part wasn't very smooth. Afterwards it was played well but quite as hell.
Try to double your guitar lines so that you get a thicker and louder sound. Also try to compress the guitars, you will be happy with the results, if done right. ;)
Drums are programmed well, nothing to bug about here.
The bpm change and the solo near the end was sweet, very well done man. Overall a good one, just needs work with the mastering phase!
Keep it up!
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