i think the symbols and string made it it was nice but a more fulent string symbol would be nice
10/10 man amzing song. i thought the string made the song even better, gives a kinds freaky feeling to the song i thought. keep up the good work.
Test my patience?
I was listening with intencity. This is the definition of Ambient Music. Free style dream music with pointless beats and tinks. Great job.
I don't know, I like it... but, it could haf been bettar. (Yes I know thats not how you spell either words.) Like the last guy said, you should just leave out all of the lighter elements. But I liked it anyway. Keep up the good work, this and your Toons, and you could become a popular flash artists.
Thanks, yeah, I get that a lot with this song. Personally, I find the lighter elements 'interesting', but it does mess up what could be an otherwise darker song. Thanks for the comment!
I really like some aspects of your ambient work, but it just seems a little incongruous. Most of it is dark, but it isn't refined, and you have some elements that suggest otherwise and detract form the dark ambiance. The "stringed" instrument is interesting, but I don't think it was used well, and should have been left out for a more purer dark tone. It was just too abstract.
I'd like to hear more of your experimenting with the dark ambient synths, and leave out the lighter overtones that ruin it. It honestly sounds like your just messing around with your Casio keyboard.
Make a deeper, more fluent and just plain better dark ambience, and leave out the lighter sounding elements, even if they are in minor notes. It just doesn't sound good with those scattered about. Stay minimalist, at least until you can do better overall. It's a decent start.
Yeah, there's a lot about this song that could've been better. It's not really supposed to be dark like many of my other tracks, really, but it could've been a good dark track if I had strayed away from the lighter aspects like you said, like the weird string parts. Thanks for the honest review!
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