STOP USING THOSE CHIMES! Dang. Still pretty original though, but very, very, very, very,very,very,very,very,very,very,very repetitive. See what I mean?
Its kinda supposed to be... lol. I actully have stoped using the "Chimes". They get on my nerves now too lol
this song is pretty cool. but you just need to learn how to be more original, and make it your own. all you did was use the standard FL samples, like the effects and hits. try tweakin them, like, in the step sequencer, click on their name and play around with some of the diffrent things in their. also, for the sytrus, like your arp and short synth, well, sytrus is really well made and all you have to do is modulate it diffrently then it starts out as, and click on OP1 to change it a bit more. cool feel though, i liked the whole dreamy mood you had going on. i hope this review helped! check out my page too.
thanks for the help
and i will do the whole tweaking thing... and i will check your page...\