Hmm, not bad - a little too slow for me if just listened on its own, but I can definitely see this as the background soundtrack to a sci-fi or cyberpunk platformer game. The ambient sound effects really give it that game OST feel to it.

The general ambience of the music is good, and I think that's kind of the main draw of this piece. That's why I think the snare is at times a little bit too heavy, especially starting from 0:48 and ending at 2:00, which kinda detracts from the ambience of the music. I think if you made the snares a bit lighter and more immersive (I recommend applying the stereo enhancer since you're using FL Studio) then you'd be able to hit the ambience dead on.

A little bit more improvement on the sound mixing and maybe using some higher quality samples for the ambient sound effects you're well on your way to getting 5 stars - keep working at it!