Love beats/sample. But lacking in other areas...
Love the voice sample ('prepare for launch in 3,2,1...'). Where did you get it? Who is it?
The beats you open with are cool - really sounding like a sped-up heart.
Not too keen on the clicking.
The stuff that comes in after the sample kinda reminds me of cheap sci-fi laser effects. Around 0:43, you bring in a basic melody. but everything else drowns it out slightly. Also, I'm not entirely keen on the instrument you use for that part.
I love the basic beats and sample, but felt disappointed you didn't take it further, with some cool melodies layered on top.