Ya it was okay. Im not really into the slow stuff usually but I can still say that this was pretty good. The intro was pretty long repetitive and boring though. You really need to shorten that. The keyboard was very nice. Nothing that different or out of the ordinary though. Still it was a very well made song. Good job.
Half way through the song I was thinking, wow it is very mellow. But then the chorus comes in and takes the song to another level.
I like your effects, but I felt your drums were really basic. This made the song a little depressing.
I enjoyed listening to it. Great job.