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Apr 8, 2007 | 11:29 AM EDT
File Info
2.4 MB
3 min 26 sec
3.50 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.50 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
589 Plays | 125 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

Attempting a darker theme



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

some flaws

I think that this has potential to be slick, but needs to be touched up a bit. the drum arrangement at the beginning seems to sparse and spastic, but later on it gets a bit better. i think they can use some editing to make them sound more intense.

that guitar-pad thing that you used sounded pretty coool except that im not too keen on those twanging sounds. i think that the feel of this song could be better achieved wiht something different, something darker.

lastly, ithink itd sound muy awesome if there were multiple melodies at the same time rather htan concentrating on one and one alone.

overall, this is a good start. :)

[sorry if im brutally honest; im jst trying to give feedback to improve rather than flood ppl with flattery. apparently some people dont like me for that :( c'est la vie.]
check my stuff plz :D

MasterSpanky responds:

i appreciate the feedback. I'm still kinda gettin used to using this and everything. thx alot for the input.