Nice try at Ambient, but I've got a few pointers for ya.
Don't use that GO! sound. It's very annoying.
Drums too out of place. Use something more low freq for Ambient stuff.
Pads could use work. They sound out of tune. Ambient stuff is usually light and very euphoric in my sense. Try to keep the stuff very deep yet bright sounding.
This was a nice try at Ambient, but it's not all that it could be. I'll 5 ya, but try a little more stuff out and maybe your next piece will be better.
yo thanks man. yeah, i tend to mess up my songs, trying to experiment and all. also, it is true that ambient is percieved as something gentle and distant. Of course, any music that can be imagined as a background to something, is ambient. Keep it up.