Hey I really like this! This is awesome! Especially at 2:00 with what you did with changing the rhythm up a bit. I could totally see somebody using this for their game!
The only suggestion is; This is WAAAAY clipped. You can tell because the waveform is breaking over the edges up above and you can hear a lot of crackling. If you still have the project file (Since, based on what I read while going through your songs, it looks like your compy decided to retire early), and if you used FL, I'd just turn down the master volume in the master filter down until the peak meter drops out of red and is at a nice white orange color. Note though, that if you use a high buffer sample count in FL, the peak won't turn red when the project starts to get hot. (At least it doesn't for me when at about 6100 samples.)
Great song though! 4.5/5 stars, 4/5 vote.
- Aeris