Not an Audio person, eh?
Lol, I was going through my reviews for no reason at all and also for no reason at all, clicked on your name, and to my shock, I found that you had composed some music. Thought I'd give you a starting review to keep you going.
It was interesting, sounds like you had about five different ideas for a melody, and then you couldn't decide and so you just shoved them all together lol. what you need to do is decide on a style, and then watch as many creation vids as you can find, id start with youtub. get a feel on how to make music like tha, then take the tutorials on what im asuming is fruity loops to get aquanted with where all of its speacial features are so that you might be able to take advantage of them. I'd like to hear more from you, especialy since your unexperienced, I want to observe the progression. Good luck and if you need any kind of help just message me.