Hey, this is pretty cool! The drop has this kind of futuristic-eroded quality to it, and it sounds really cool! All I have to say is that there's this kind of massive sidechain-y feel to the whole thing, like everything just stops happening for the duration of each kick. Sometimes that's okay, but I think that here, it's just a bit awkward. Maybe only sidechain the medium/low elements, and not quite as hard?
Still, I think this track accomplished the goal of sounding creepy. Cool!