cool...

Nice work. pretty average.

Mmm...

This was a good try, but there are some things you have to consider.

Firstly, the synth that opened this piece needs more attack on it; it's far too soft for the role it's trying to play. Secondly, the drum loop is perfectly compressed, but with a song that's not well compressed, it brings itself violently into the foreground which is a bad thing.

Keep practicing. It seems to me that you don't have much experience in techno, so it's normal for the first few projects to be learning experiences.