Wow. Nice one!
Sounds choices are pretty good.
That snare you got's quite odd. Maybe a little bit to punchy for this kind of style.
And you need to compress everything for sure.
Anyways, love the tracks that are not repetitive and this piece is the perfect example.
Feel like if you spent few hours more on the track, extended it and polished it, it would be fully amazing.
Great job, keep it up.