I like the melody when that comes in it has a nice vibe, you obviously have a good ear for music. However that's why i get a little confused because imo the whole thing is let down by the mix clipping/distorting so badly. You must of been red lining the entire time, im kinda suprised you didnt notice/hear/see this. If you look at the waveform in the player you can see all the peaks have been cut off which gives the whole track a very over compressed and lifeless dynamic and of corse distorted which is a shame because i stops the full potentional of the track from shining through.
Please dont take this as hate as i like the music but i heard this and then thought dang, if only the mix was clean.

Beautiful melody. Loving the raw ideas here. Mix between video game and dubstep!
Very refreshing vibes and the chord progression is an amazing choice.

The song is clipping quite hard tho. Amazing track but if you could turn down the volume
before it hits your master and/or turn the limiters Gain down if you currently have
a limiter on the master you could get rid of the clipping.

LOVE the melodic skill! I don't like to judge on mixing as my first focus
however the volume did take away some points. Amazing song just hidden
behind the static/white noise.

I have a hunch you will place in Nate's competition

now that's a fancy track. really enjoyable and fun. although that distortion isn't so great and I imagine that wasn't on purpose. I like the song a lot though, nice track and gl with contest!

Remember when I wrote a review for one of your tracks ages ago saying that you had a lot of potential? Well I was right... this is really good. My advice is to try and fix the clipping in songs in the future, it is clipping quite a bit and comes out as distorted. If that was to be fixed then this would 100% be a five star piece. Well done!