My first thoughts

The rain pours down and removes the mask i wear. No more happy for me. There has been too much death for me to handle. The cost of battle was high.
MUSIC ENTERS SCENE
The city i once called home is now reduced to rubble. My life is in shambles. What has happened to me? is this the end?

Okay

It's pretty good. I love the rain and thunder sounds, but you could use a bit of improvement on the drums, then it could probably be very good. I could likely use this in one of my flash vids i'm working on at the moment. Good luck with the next one. Cheers. *tips back some root beer*

A little polyphonic

Love the melody and "feel" you got going here. However, I felt the drums could use some improvement, they sound a bit too weak for the song.
Plus, I think it needs more reverb. And somehow, I feel you should add some taiko drum, or even timpani in that. But hey, 'tis your *Awesome* original peice of work. And I might use it in this freeware game I'm working on.

Anywho, swing by my Audio and drop me a review.
More specifically, Glory FXT.

--Armymenis12--