Me likee

It was all great.

OMG

That sound just like my songs! Check them out man!

Garageband?

Cheers!

So awsome i used it in my movie!

Hope u dont mind! Thanx!

Okay.

The song was good until the guitar FIRST came in. It confused me, and it just, sounded weird. This sounds better calm, but I also think you used loops for you project, so there wasn't much you could really do to add variation, right? What program did you use, like..acid or something? Sounds ambient, because I don't think I've heard industrial like this before. It's not too bad, for messing around, but it could be better.
3/5
Everlasting-Elements
Can you check my new song out?

Amazing!

Sounds very good actually. It has a nice beat, and everything. I am amazed with this song, and it really does come from the Industrial Genre. Later, as the song progresses it get a little ouder, then smooth again. Again, man, that is a fine peice of work.