Very nice

So this one does have some good quality about it and you should really think about making it into that song you talk about it has that "IT" factor as some say my only issue here is that its way too short and needs to be made into a full fledged song. Finest detail I have heard in a long time, So I am looking forward to see what else you can come out with, as this was one of those pieces that sticks out at you so nice efforts here. you gave this some nice Rhythm and have composed a nice piece here. Keep up this type of quality.

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my only issue here is that its way too short and needs to be made into a full fledged song.

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