Great song!
I'm a sucker for cool original melodies and it seems that you got one here.
Anyways, thought it would be louder .. ehrm .. and that the song would go wild at some point.
Transitions are good yes, but for example that loud riser and buildup around 1:00 get me really pumped up and then it kinda looses volume.
Some sound level adjusment would be a thing you could consider.
Arrangement is pretty dope, and once more, melody is really great. I did enjoy it!
Cheers!