I'm really excited to see someone remaking this track and the results are excellent! However, the lead melody that comes in at 00:57 I think could do with being played on a different voice because the quiet instrument that plays it detracts from the melodies emotional power.
I gave you a 7...
It sounds quite good, although there were some parts that don't make it sound like the proper song. Also, at the beginning, the background sounds like someone who hasn't cut his nails in a few years found the roughest blackboard ever existed and scratched the blackboard again and again and again (Keeps going till 00:43 = [ ). Well anyway, it still sounds quite good, and you did give that hurry up feeling in it. I guess all that just earned you a 7. Good job overall.
It's good but not great.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.