yeh meh this is probly better than the remix i think good job
I hate to give a bad review, especially if this is your first attempt at a genre, but I really didn't enjoy listening to this.
Mostly, because it felt slapped together. You have a bunch of different synth sounds, all making seemingly random melodies, thrown in and out at apparently random times. You've got a bit of wierd off-tempo things going on at times, and the bass goes in and out at pretty wierd spots.
What made this problem worse was that I really didn't like any of the sounds, except maybe the bass. I don't know what you're working with here, but really spend alot of time playing with whatever software you've got to try to produce sounds that you enjoy alot and know other people will enjoy. If you did that with this, then ignore that last bit and I'll just leave it at I didn't find the sounds at all to my liking.
Really, I just need to stress spending time on making these things and listening to them over and over again until you think they're as perfect as you can make them. Because while I obviously have no idea how long you spent on this, it really seems as though you didn't put much time or effort into this at at. It's a pretty short loop, and it has no cohesiveness at all.
So keep working on this, and I'm sure you'll do better in the future. Not trying to seem mean here, but was this an april fool's joke? Listening to some of your older stuff, its all at least bit better than this. So if it's a joke, and I no have reason to feel terrible for asking, I'm sure your next one will be better.
Anyways, I'll assume this isn't a joke, and just say that I hope you keep working at making songs and I hope you improve.
If you have the time, would you check out my most recent song, "Finding the Pulse"?
I would really appreciate a listen and a review, thanks.
No, this wasn't a joke, more of a coincidence, but you were correct; I only spent roughly 20 minutes on this.