I like taffy.
Alot of work is needed here, but for what it is, it's original and interesting. I think the song could be played at a faster tempo, and the drums could stand to be alot stronger and more varied, but it was a neat constant polyrhythem. The synth could be grittier. Curious, what program are you using?
Right now.... Just FL Studio 7 care to help?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.