Needs rhytm but you have to do a music with that . THIS music is YOURS .

Very nice

From start to finish this was notbad at all I could go over a few things and I will in time but this was still a nice track, so props to you on this one. This one kind of reminds of of a pirate theme like on a ship at sea or something and I can see it being used for something like that, so in that sense you could ad some build up like theres wild waters or something but its an idea that could work with a ship scene. Alright so I could see this being used in a number of movies and games, and you have a nice little track here with some great promise.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be a little longer with some more build up about it.

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