While this is super crazy and unmelodic. I think it works just fine with that as the thought that fills my head is that of a fight with a psychotic clown in a ruined carnival.

It's mixed in a weird way. the melody is not very melody like, and the volume goes up and down
in a random manner. To say something positive: the thing at 0:45 and 0:06, didn't make my ears
bleed, and could be used in something... with something else.
To give you advice, try making melodies that sound good,
instead of it looking cool in the Piano Roll.