Very nice

So this was an interesting piece, I like what you have done here with this piece, and like the "BUILD-UP" at about 00:38-00:44 but you need more of those build ups and ofcourse this track could be a tad bit longer so stretch it out as best as you can, overall very nice work here. So with the whole tune in my head it was a good reliefe to finally finish it, I was generall pleased with this, right from the start with some good effects and a good touch of skills put into this and cant wait for more from you. And thats all I have to say at this point.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More build up points, and make the whole piece longer aswell.

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