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Author Comments

*Sigh* this wasn't designed to be good. It sums up my feelings as a whole.


Cool ideas. Once agian man im pretty anal about percussion lol. but honestly the better you improve it, the high quality your productions will be. see at this stage. just fine tune. spend some time getting the feel for the frequencies. mix for clarity. do each instrument at a time. then do them all together.


Butterscotch, yo!
Nice, but repeating the main line 20 times makes it quite boring. Despite that its good!

I like it

Once again I find myself finding something different and unique in the portal and thats what I have here, a decent piece with some nice little extras. I like what you have here but it should be much longer its kind of short but as for the content that you do have it was very good, but also I would suggest adding more mix and variaty as this was bland at times but you can have it build up pretty well, but other then that this was not too bad. Well that was that a fine track that shows your effort and while it was different i still found it to have good value all about it.

more build up, make it longer and some faster tempos aswell.


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AlphaStorm73 responds:

Thanks for the review, however this is likely to be the last song I'll ever make so I'm not likely to make any changes.

What a great way to end your career, Alpha... We'll all miss you <3 ~Skiddle

I love the melody of this song. Really atmospheric!

Good luck with the rest of your life, by the way.

have fun while you can.

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Credits & Info

3.94 / 5.00

Dec 15, 2017
2:42 PM EST
File Info
2.6 MB
1 min 55 sec

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