Wow, great work there!

I think you can still improve this. For example, I think the volume of the "hayy~" voice in the drops (between almost each 1st and 2nd time) is too high. I would put it more in background and fade it with the high pas filter. Also, the high pass filter at 01:43 is a little bit simple, and may pass (no, there's no pun here -_-), but it could be thought and worked harder on my opinion.

Beside these negative but constructive comments (I hope), I think your stuff deserves more attention.
Keep it up!