First of two! :)
This one, apparently, got zero-voted, and multiple times too - so I'll review it first. I should be able to review your other song later today. :) Now to wait for this song to load on the extremely slow computer I'm on... >:(
Nice opening, with the piano, and it definitely is a little slow. Aah, here are some drums... and synths? Okay...
I like the ambient sound in this... good choice in where you submitted it. :P It sounds very harmonic, and everything's chosen well. The synth, however, could have been a bit less distorted - and if it's really an instrument, that proves how distorted it is! :D The piano seemed a bit harsh at times, as well. But overall this is very good.
Your percussion... it's very good, I like the effects... the panning, too! Very smart, there, shifting from ear to ear. And getting quieter as it goes in between, too, so it sounds like it's circling around your head. :P Nothing in it's repeated from what I can hear... and yet it doesn't sound too bad. You introduce new drums later on, and they sound a bit out-of-place, but find their niche later on.
The piano chords now are feeling a bit repetitive. You could have used a bit more variation in them, instead of going with the same four every time. That would have made the song golden. :D
Not much else to say about this song... it's great! Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reviewing your other song once I have the time. :)
A very subtle piece. Beautiful and sweeping. The piano work is minimal but good and the strange beeping sounds work well. I like this. Very well done and nicely edited. Felt as if i was floating down a river looking up at the sun. Very nice.
If you could can you check out my audio?