I think u need drum lessons.
The drums are OK but nothing like they should be for this song. the bass drum in hte beginning is good for a snare but not a bass. it sounds soo bad. instead of using the channle to ad more drum hits why not just use revirb or sonthing. that would make it sound ALOT more pro and would totaly change my 1st impression of this song. it was good and with a little more practice i am quite shour you will be pumping out songs like a pro.