Enjoyed it, but not the perfect style of loop imo.
Definitely a step up from the other version!
One complaint (a minor one) is that you could've maybe optimised the looping marginally more.
My favourite element is all the sfx in the bg. Like the 'glass breaking-esque' sound (at 30/9s) and the various whirrings.
Having listened to it for maybe 10 minutes just now (and the previous version for 10-20 minutes altogether) I'm starting to get a bit tired of the slightly over-methodical layout.
Also, the tone of the instrument that plays the melody from 20-31s... it sorta seems overly distracting to me somehow.
The layout of the track seems to be 'dull repetitition with strange bg noises for 25s, with a quick build/drop to/from a 10s melody'. It's not really an ideal loop imo - I prefer a style that makes a loop sorta blend into itself - full of variations, but no particular bits that stand out. That's just my opinion of what a perfect loop is. Just my opinion.
I really enjoyed listening to it for 2-3 minutes, but it's not the style I'd want in a game.
I loved the square pad you disorted and maxed up later as the loop went on. The little fx you have in here sounds really good too. I like the bass, it sounds like most DnB bass does though
The hat thing you have here is really a little annoying but that's about it.
Nice melodies and all
Excellent parts, solid production
Dig the synths big time! The one that starts protruding from the right in the mix about halfway through sounds cool as hell. They all mix together well both melodically and texturally.
The drums seem almost there, something about them isn't quite hitting though. The writing seems cool, the overall sound to them blends in well, the little breaks w/cymbals are well-written...just something I can't quiteplace that isn't quite bringing it together for me. They just sound a little too seperated from the rest of the mix. They're still quite good overall though.
I actually had this originally as an 8, but after having it on loop for the duration of the loop I started liking it more and more. I'll def be checking out your other stuff on here.
well first of all first time I heard this it sounded a LOT like a show I've seen. Ghost in the shell. Sounds just like the theme to me but what do i know.it was a good nice techno beat. but It sounds to me like i've heard it before lol. I just hope you didn't copy XD