that snare should be louder, kinda buried in the mix, i like the drums though.
that chorus around :55 was awesome sounding, the noise helped add a little extra to the song

i think the song would benefit a lot more from having a little more thought out melody, its good but it feels looped, it would be awesome to hear a change up especially since it really fits with everything else!

keep up the good tunes yo! can't wait to hear more