Hello Newgrounds! I just recently got into making music and i would like to share this with you! please note that i have only been doing this for two weeks. i appreciate feedback
I can tell you used LMMS!
So do I!
This could handle some major... major improvements, but, there are some things which I like about this :)
Looking forward to seeing more from you!
Also, I'll Scout you, as a musician, and that will allow you to be on the charts. Your view counts will go waaay up, and all that. :)
thank you so much! my more recent submissions are of much higher quality but thanks for the scout!
Oh hello there! I think 00:01-00:21 Is a pretty decent start and I can’t see anything that needs improvement really. Though 00:22-00:37 Could need something in the background to make it feel less empty. I feel like the wait between 01:00-01:05 Is way too long and should be around 3 seconds shorter. 01:05-01:33 Is too repetetive imo but it sounds really good. At 01-4-02:08 You use the same melody instead of something completely different. I think you should’ve used something different there :P ...
Overall a 2.5/5 Considering this is your first uploaded track. I can see a lot of potential in you! :)
yep, this song is kinda crap... thanks for the review
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