First 30 seconds, fluent af, the snare gets alot of attention, it just sticks out a bit, i love the appregio around 1:10 it reminds me of matrix and csi so much for some reason, this has a nice melody to it but i feel bad if i did a review without giving anything to work on, i feel like the snare and the main melody lacks character, it feels slightly dull, which leaves the listener with a "i fee like it's missing something" you know?
keep it up! this is excellent concidering this is your second song, keep it up, i wanna check upcoming songs aswell.
- Panda