Jessie I think this is an awesome orchestral piece!
I have only 1 little problem with it,
and it is the limiter, it pumps like hell :D but no wonder if you are using Fruity Limiter,
(I use FL for everything, from composing to mix and mastering, but I tend to use 3rd party limiter,
and there is a great one for free:
George Yohng's W1 Limiter (this is the full name of the limiter)
It sounds exactly like the Waves W1 limiter (or what is the correct name of that plugin, I don't know :))
W1 can make it loud like this, but withOUT pumping,
unfortunatelly Fruity Limiter can't,
Fruity Limiter is a "pumpy" limiter :D, which might be a good choice for some techno stuff tho
W1 Limiter is for Windows and Mac too (if I remember correctly)
Good luck with your next limiting stuff with W1 Limiter! You won't regret trying it out!
Keep doing this type of music, compositionally it's awesome! (no kidding)
Oh.. and you should also check out VPO = Virtual Playing Orchestra (this is the name of the free orchestral library that I use for sketching)
It is the best free now, believe me :D
It contains some of the sonatina Orchestra patches AND many more,
you can use it with the free sfz player called sforzando.
Happy composing! :)