hm, getting there

getting there but still a long way to go ;)

1) last poster is right, that cheap synth is out of place; choose something a little more flowing, a little Release would help wonders! and some lowpass to get rid of that high pitched twinge

2) the cymbals NEED to be replaced by a bright hat with quick decay or a ride (either one needing highpass and decent Q to make them ticky or splashy)

those two would do a lot, but theres style and potential here

Good start

I'd have to agree with the previous reveiwer. I think the drum beat is dope. But then it not only gets ruined but drowned out with this casio keyboard 25 cent synth. Awesome potential... I mean i even ejoyed the finger snapping in the back. And when the cymbols come in is nasty too. But that synth man... ruined it.

~ Birds Fly

Well....it wuz ok...

I like the way it started, and i guess maybe my expectations were different. Because u wurr reppin da bay I wuz expectin more craziness. I'm not sayin that its really bad but I'm just sayin it could use some more work. Keep wurkin at it and I'm sure it'll be dope az hell. Peace.