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(The fourteenth song of 'The Archer Girl', telling stories with the song)

What happened next after "Search And Rescue"?

Listen to the previous episode, "Search And Rescue" here: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/769087

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Ari and you stare hard at Dr. Kingsley. He is still grinning an evil smile.

"Well, well," he says, "how astonishing. Two little kiddies trying to stop me."

He slowly backs away.

"But can you?"

Just then, the big round of military soldiers comes from every direction, slowly surrounding you and Ari, aiming their guns. Dr. Kingsley runs away.

"What do we do?" You whisper to Ari.

"There's no choice," Ari says, holding her bow, "but to fight!"

She instantly shoots an arrow at one of the soldiers. You madly shoot the guns at the military. The soldiers start to knock down one by one. You throw one of the grenades towards them. It blows up, all knocks down. You throw another grenade while Ari grabs you by the arm.

"Dr. Kingsley ran away. We must chase him down!"

But just then Ari knocks down. Her leg was shot. You see who shot her. It was one of the soldiers of HERO. You shoot him. He plops on the floor. You look at Ari. She is badly hurt.

"Are you okay?" you say.

"I'm fine," Ari says, panting.

"Can you get up?" you ask.

Ari tries to get up but fails.

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Outside of the facility, Base A military fights hard with the monsters, but soldiers start to die one by one. The secondary commander urgently contacts Commander Rex to send more reinforcements.

"We need soldiers, sir! We're losing!"

. . .

You shoot rapidly towards the incoming military soldiers. They keep coming in and in towards you and Ari.

"You know," Ari says, looking at you, "maybe it's my turn to do exactly what my father did."

You instantly remind of Ari's father killing himself to get rid of the zombies. You shook your head.

"No," you say.

"Yes," Ari says. "Dr. Kingsley is escaping. You have to stop him. I can't get up, and can't run. My father must have faced that as well."

You nod. He was also facing danger and he had no way to go further. You and he were both facing danger, and he decided to save you, by sacrificing himself.

"Now it's my turn," Ari says, "to save you and the base. Stop Dr. Kingsley and save everyone."

You notice more and more soldiers surrounding you and Ari. Ari throws one of the strongest grenades. One corridor goes empty.

"Go!" Ari shouts.

This is only the preview of the story. Read the whole story here : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z5QGXjV0RBMI8a4g6t-kTpj2E9Ehs3X0a1HVQ_Xacqc

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Composed, Mixed and Story by Jessie Yun
Created with GarageBand iOS (iPhone Version)
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