Eh, it's okay.
The drums are nice, melodies are fantastic and for someone your age, you've really impressed me :)
Though there are somethings to work on like the mastering, background noise and transition. I really like your choice of synths. You've earned my respect!
P.s Why did you put that you're 33 when really you're 11? :/
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