Vainglorious is right about Lino, if you looked on his profile, he says he is 13, your 15, and supposedly have your picture posted on yours. Same age group. Anyways about the song. Not bad, When I started this song the clouds blocked out the sun outside my window sooo...Its a little weird. Repetitive, but you said you liked your songs...Mellow. Good job, 4/5.
Zombies eh? I think they always want head.
Yawn. You do realize I did not have to type that, but I am trying to prove a point like a jackass. Okay, this was my favorite out of all of your submissions. Truthfully they all put me to sleep, except for this one. The tune is catchy and it has a little life to it. And, I hope you know that Lino guy, or he's just some creepy internet stalker. With that on your mind, goodbye.
The very thing I love about my music is that it can put someone to sleep :) They are meant to be mellow and calm....and notice how most of them have to do with sleep just in the name. "Picasso Dream" "Midnight Clock" "A Nap with the Clouds". These songs don't have much life in them which i am proud of because...well...I don't like life as much as most people. Zombies really do make better boyfriends for me :)And as for Lino, I really wouldn't care if he were an internet stalker, i hardly talk with the guy. he's nice though, don't get me wrong. silly man.
Better than my second song
This is cool, the string sounds in the middle were pretty awsome, it added something to it. Don't know what, but it works! You are making pretty good songs!