Dope beat, love the oboe that shows itself after your verse.
Speaking of your verse, I agree with Teddy that it is a little too dry.
Other than that, I have no qualms.
Great track bruv!
Really nice beat man. I like the way the drums almost sound slowed down to match the sample. Vocal mix sounds good, though a little dry. Some subtle delay or a bit more reverb on there might sound good. Solid track overall
Hey man. This was actually written to your beat. Shoulda put it on that, honestly.
I feel ya about the dry sound. I toned the reverb down from what it was actually. Could turn it up a bit now I got the mix right.
Thanks for the review
Definitely some dope stuff here! Lyrics were on point and beat was chill with a dark self story to relate to. I noticed it could use some more to it, maybe a hook later on or something ya know but great work dude, gonna recommend this to a friend.
There was actually another verse, but the tone was so different between them it didnt feel like it matched up right. Almost like a separate story.
Thanks fa listening man. I swear I gotta go in on one of your beats next.
This is dope. I was really taken aback when the vocals came in because the beat was slow and had a sorta janky rhythm to it, while the rapping was super fast and frenetic. It's a cool contrast. I'm wondering what the track would sound like if the drums were busier and more frenetic like the vocals.
Dig the vinyl noise in the back. It was almost acting like a set of hats, in addition to the hats you had in the beat.
With the beat I was going more for the lofi stoner sound. Faster hats would be good for the rap I suppose but I think ultimately wouldn't be right for the feel. So yea I agree the contrast is a little jarring at first. Verse would be better on the original beatbit was written to.
all my 5 stars <3 <3 <3
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