The beginning could have been louder, then later i didn't understand the song very well; however, i loved the part at 1:00. Keep it up :)

This seemed to "lose it" a bit at 00.47, then at 03.29 it seemed to launch into a completely different song??? That said, I've tonight listened to everything you've uploaded and sure can tell that your heart is really into the fine music you are consistently producing and improving upon. You my friend, have been scouted! :)