i really like it but...
in some of the sections it did get a bit repetittive and even a little annoying really original though i really like that the audios nice and clean over all a great track with a tiny bit of work could be mind blowing
Could use work.
Hmm. You don't introduce nicely... but the section with the bass is nice. You should have introduced with that, in my opinion.
Not much to say... the melody sounds somewhat random, as if you didn't put very much effort into it. It might be trance but it's a bit too repetitive anyway. Ooh, nice filter here... sounds good.
There are too few harmonies, in my opinion... you could have done with one more. But the ones that you do have are great - the bass/arp/whatever synth is great, and I love that note progression! Not much else to say about them, though.
Again, you just made nice use of filters... good job.
I also like the percussion with this song... the only problem is that the kick is causing distortions in quality and the hihat sounds a bit weak at times, compared to the clap. The sound quality of the clap is also fairly low...
What's that? This almost made me laugh. You had your lead synth play notes getting faster until it was getting laughably fast... was that an attempt at a buildup of some kind? Hah! That shouldn't have happened. Oh well.
You don't give off much of an atmosphere in this song, for some reason... the synths, the melody, the harmonies, and the percussion - most of them go in different directions. So I really can't derive a particular emotion or attitude from this song... keep trying.
Overall decent, but could use work. I hope my advice helps. =)
thx man, I liked the buildups, I heard in some trance song and tried to make it in this song. Really really usefull review =)
I see what your going with this.
The melody was pretty sweet. Except that the intro was kind of off of the whole song. And then came the lower kick. Didn't fit well to me. What Program do you use for music? I use Fl 5, 6, 7, producer edition =D Check out some of my stuff!
Thanks man, I use Magix music maker 2007 (It's not very common). I'll maby use fl in the future, but it's pretty expensive.
Checking your stuff soon ;)