Nice I might do the lyrics...

Yeah it was pretty good and I think I might be able to make lyrics for it... It have a lot of chorus (do to the ****load of repitition) but I might be able to work something up.

Cool rock sound... but...

The lower quality segments don't seem to fit in as well as they could, and the song repeats chords way too much.

Maybe it would get better with vocals, I don't know.

(Personally I prefer music without vocals, but its not my call.)

I also judge music by how long I can listen to it before it gets underneath my skin. It doesn't take this song very long.

pretty good

this one is really well composed, you have a great melody going. The sounds could be better for a a perfect score, but I know that with software its very hard to make rock sound like it was played live (I had a similar problem with my 'Could It Be?' track). Any ways, great job. Keep it up.