Wow I must say you have done a fantastic job on this piece, it sounds very realistic and the voice very deep with good quality about it, so nice job indeed.
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I think it was just right maybe a few more backround scary stuff but overall very good.
Thank you so much for the feed back. I appreciate it.
You have a really nice voice for narrating / off-voices. great job!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.