ok at the beginning but as time began to progress i began to notice the immediate start of the chorus and then the abrupt ending of it. Though this is ok it felt like it did not belong here as it sounded techy in a fantasy world if you catch my drift. Like something that did not belong. But toward the end your song began to make up for itself only to go back to the chorus. Over all you did good, just the chorus was my only complaint.
The thing that's bugging me is the chorus.. Overall, great song!
Don't remind me. -_-'
Man, I actually see dreams like that. -_-' I will give you a ten though cause that's great music as always. ^.^
i really like this but....
the chorus and the strings kinda sound off balance.
and even without the violin this song would be great.
i think the violins to screechy.:(
I sorta crapped on this song..
Hi there, The Bosa!
Let's begin, then.
First of all, it begins a bit suddenly to me. Maybe you could have started the song with part of the choir and then, the whole choir. Also, i do hear the choir aren't that realistic.
However, the violin is superb and does sound realistic to me. It would have been great to hear it more often in the song.
And to tell the truth, the continuously long notes tend to be boring. Hopefully, the last part, with the bass drum wakes up the mood.
Well, that's all for today. As you guessed, that one isn't your best, honestly. But well, once in a while, that's nothing serious, your other tunes rocks, and you know it.
PS: i've finally released my first songs of the "Major Arcana". Well, these two aren't my best, but just wait for the rest!
Sorry about the late response. I intended for this piece to be used in some sort of dialog, that explains the long notes.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.