This one felt too long for me personally. Having a voice and lyrics might hold me a little better. I really liked the variation around 3:06, though; the way the synth seemed to break down there caught my interest.
Was that the amen break at 4:15?
Criticism aside I've enjoyed listening through your tracks and look forward to hearing what you come up with next. :)
I've googled the "amen break", which sounds better than the one I've used for that (which is from a sample pack at SampleRadar). Thanks for the criticism though, I appreciated it a lot :D
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