The claps sound out of place for the dynamic of the song--downtempo and mechanical. the looped bassy sounds themselves sounded okay at first, but just werent interesting as the song went on. having no melody, espicially in songs like this, could be good, so those random off-tune bleeps halfway through the song just seem out of place. and the song never changes throughout the track. sorry, but ill have to agree with the guy below me.
On the positive side, the bassy sounds and twanging thing in the background werent that bad, but the claps just seemed to take them away from my attention. You can do better, though, since, under its problems, there was some good stuff here.
on another note, take a look at my songs if u want :D
thank you for your review, as you might have already figured out, i'm still learning, your review is a perfect example of a good way for people like me to learn about what we can do better, i'm finetuning the song, hope to get it to sound alot better some day.
I found this a little too boring. The loop or the sounds didn't really change until the end of the audio. I think you should put more sounds and more effort into making this. Your friend too. It wasn't so clear either. But at least it was very original. Overall 4.
thanks for your opinion,i should have mentioned it was not finished, as you've said, it's boring, we are currently working to get more diversity in it.
thanks for your time