I love the dubstep part but the thing is that 1, it's really unfitting, and 2, the intro is goofy as hell

crazy stuff!

Look, I absolutely adore your melodies, man
but the drops, yes, alot of work should be done to them
I feel like having actual instruments and real energy would be lovely, and feeling more original. You have the potential, (Unlike sharks) to make good music, gl man, ^-^ hope you fix those drops though.

oof

It was great the start but when you slowed the entire music in the buildup it just went bad and unfiting... And that made the music go from great to bad... And the bass arrangement was bad... I don't mean it was bad but bad that it didn't really fit with the music at all... It was off... Like if you copy pasted the drop from a random music onto another music that has nothing to do with the style... Making this one of the worst tracks you've ever made...