constructive criticism ahead!!
this song doesn't give me a really Dance vibe, it sounds more funky. maybe make a livelier beat.
overall its pretty nice, the sounds are good, but maybe use some pads and FX to layer it and make it sounds more full, yeah?
I'd say 4.5/5. Nice job! I can tell you are gonna be a whole lot better in the future. keep going!
Thank you so much (: I'll be sure to keep your advise in mind next time
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