constructive criticism ahead!!
this song doesn't give me a really Dance vibe, it sounds more funky. maybe make a livelier beat.
overall its pretty nice, the sounds are good, but maybe use some pads and FX to layer it and make it sounds more full, yeah?
I'd say 4.5/5. Nice job! I can tell you are gonna be a whole lot better in the future. keep going!
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I tried a few different things and I think overall this song turned out really well. There is some unwanted sounds at the start, but they go away once in the midst of the song.
Please give constructive criticism as I'm hoping to bless your ears with good music one day.
SlyFrost responds:
Thank you so much (: I'll be sure to keep your advise in mind next time
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