not bad.
-camsn8ke

Fun little loop. If there were some chords playing or a slow melody kicked in around the half way point, it could've probably been enough to elevate this from "fun little loop" to the basis of a full song.

It's surprising how figuring out a little pattern by itself could set the ground work for a whole song. I like the broken sounding melody, the drum patterns could use something simple in between, me thinks.

I like it, but kinda wished it was more fleshed out.

I like that mixture of robotic, upbeat and eerie you managed to pull here. I had it playing on loop while writing this comment. Loved it!

Nice

I think you could reall go deep on this one, because this piece was unique and has a rare sound that I have not really heard in awhile. Anyways really nice sound here a good and rare vibe you have on this one and I think you could make this longer that sound is different and unique and I could see you stretching this out even longer adding build up and more added sounds and instraments ofcourse, It was a pleasure to find this unique and different sound, you could really do more with this but for what it is its a nifty sound and good vibe.

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I think adding more instraments and more random sounds could stretch this out a bit.

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Heyy, that's pretty good. I like the percussion. It makes the dark, dissonant, robotic synth sound more goofy and lighthearted. :D