Nice

I think you could reall go deep on this one, because this piece was unique and has a rare sound that I have not really heard in awhile. Anyways really nice sound here a good and rare vibe you have on this one and I think you could make this longer that sound is different and unique and I could see you stretching this out even longer adding build up and more added sounds and instraments ofcourse, It was a pleasure to find this unique and different sound, you could really do more with this but for what it is its a nifty sound and good vibe.

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I think adding more instraments and more random sounds could stretch this out a bit.

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Heyy, that's pretty good. I like the percussion. It makes the dark, dissonant, robotic synth sound more goofy and lighthearted. :D

I liked the ride cymbal and the woodblock in the background. They both added a nice texture to whatever the other sounds were.

hey thats gross beat time manipulation! i love gross beat!
nice and spooky tone thats oddly reassuring, like a broken 50s diner post nuclear war
pretty cool yo

I can imagine this loop as a theme for some weird character in an rpg. Some sort of robot or scientist. It's cool