*Lemme move my 8-bit char over here...*

Dood nice. This sounds like you jacked it straight out of a Final Fantasy overworld theme-but you didn't lol. It is extremely laid back-if extremely can so be laid back?!

I dont think the claps and the hats really mess anything up too much at all. The verb is very powerful in creating all the more dreaminess to it with those claps. I also like putting wind into my music cuz it can be easily identified, and adds realism to the song. Also helps paint the picture and create a tangible setting.

Real good.

~JAG

Awe-inspiring

Now this was a great relaxing and creative little piece, and exactly what I was looking for. It got me in the writing spirit (actually your other track "Sunnyville" did too). Time to go rightly write ^_^.

Hey!

Long time no see-- or... Talk... Yeah, um... Yeah.

Anyway, what's new? We haven't talked in what? 2 months? We need to catch up! :)

Onto the review!
This is a very nice piece. I can see that you've improved a HELL of a lot! If we could do a collab later... I'll go on AIM tomorrow, if I remember. :P

So, yeah, bottom line: Great piece but we need to talk more, lol.

Hmm...zorz....

It seems like you could have developed the song to be a better ambient piece than trance. The drums didn't really have a lasting appeal. Nor did the song go too much of anywhere. The overall feeling was nice though. It built slightly, but nothing really much. Well, whatever, maybe it's opinion, maybe it's fact, but either way, I can say with absolute confidence that the synths are awesome. Nice :D

-ImperfectDisciple-

Four times Perfection

nice of you to make a song for your dad.

and an appropriate birthday song, too. obviously very trancy. i loved the background noise, and the sparseness of the beat. the clap, especially, came in at just the right point. very good rhythm. i didn't love the main synth, it was a bit... boring?, but the melody was good. and the sounds you add later in the song to augment that do their purpose well.

a very, very soothing track. maybe not as long as it could have been, but very well put together, almost gossamer sounding.

so great job.